first sprite ever

[socom]

C&C please

[Vinthian]

it's a little bright and sharp, and it's hard to make out the render. i like the effects and flow a lot though, you need to work on your text a bit.

[face123]

Nice sprite although the sprite is to blended in with the backround try erasing the gaussin blur around the sprite, it has a gaussin blur around it right?

[Vinthian]

gaussian blur / lighten combo i bet. it'd work out well for the dots, but not so much for the sprite.

[face123]

Yeah thought so too it would look better if it was the backround but not the sprite itself.... It has nice pen tool work though....

[socom]

thanks for the c&c

[Cartman]

TOO BRIGHT, but it's pretty good.

[socom]

how is this one?

[Vinthian]

!!! much improved man, i like it a lot better than the first one. gjgj.

[socom]

thanks i thought is was better too

[Zero]

1st sprite
- cant see the sprite well
- over sharpened
+ effects look ok
- + text

2nd sprite
u have improved since the first
+ sprite is visible
- still over sharpened
- + text
- + maybe a different color border

but overall both r good , also [- +] meant like neutral not good but not bad

[Vinthian]

oversharpening stuff makes it look pixelated, like the lines. it's best to just lighten it rather than sharpen.

[socom]

how is this one

i think this one is the best of them...besides the text

[Zero]

too bright

[socom]

Originally Posted by Zero

too bright

this better