New sig(sorry Warzone) - Guild Inn

Raconteur · 05-10-08, 00:35

I made this for a friend and I tried to avoid it but Warzones bleach render was the only good one( I know it's not as good as his). So please CnC.

WarZone · 05-10-08, 00:43

render and concept :p lol its all good bro idc but it looks like it could use some work. The render dont match the bg (the colors dont match) IMO mabye darken the bg a lil bit. add a light source to the top right corner.

Raconteur · 05-10-08, 00:48

Yeah I know it was just for a friend who knows nothing about sigs

but I should have flipped it like you lol. Then the light source would be right

WarZone · 05-10-08, 00:54

lol keep working on it lol

vichter · 05-10-08, 15:20

lighting could also use some work, imo. There's a very bright spot on the tag's left side (render's right) but i think the render's lighting is coming from the opposite side. There appears to be more light on the render's left side rather than on the right.

Maybe you could flip the render or perhaps just adjust the light source.

NSR · 05-10-08, 16:35

omg I love it :O nice effects!

WarZone · 05-10-08, 16:44

Quote:

Originally Posted by vichter

lighting could also use some work, imo. There's a very bright spot on the tag's left side (render's right) but i think the render's lighting is coming from the opposite side. There appears to be more light on the render's left side rather than on the right.

Maybe you could flip the render or perhaps just adjust the light source.

lol thats wat i did i flipped the render so the light source fit better.

i think the sig is cool tho i think he might have done a little better than i did once he fixes the lighting and a few other things

good work

Raconteur · 05-10-08, 21:46

Ok fixed lighting what ya think?

Alexei · 05-10-08, 21:59

Lighting's better now, but the problem I have is the general composition. It feels like the render is positioned a bit too low which makes it look like he's basically in the ground and not standing on it. Also, I find some of the C4Ds you used distracting and they don't really add to the signature.

Last but not least, try making it so that the render fits in with the background, right now the colours of the render and the stock are too different for them to actually fit together. Try working with some gradient maps and all that on top to fix the colouring.

Raconteur · 05-10-08, 22:23

Answer... He is a midget. Lol thanks man

Hutzon · 05-10-08, 22:35

am i the only one who is going to say why the heck is the render so blurring edges, was that an attempt to blend it with the background?

Deza · 05-10-08, 22:36

renders too dark and the train is so bright out =\

Raconteur · 05-10-08, 22:37

No just something different, it doesn't look good?

WarZone · 06-10-08, 00:17

it could be better like said b4 the render is darker than the background it dont look right. some of the c4d's r distracting. you shoud work a little bit more on it.