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[ReMiiX]

Rate My Work And Tell Me Where To Improve, I Want To Go To The Next stage In GFX;

KillZone



Hulk


Ace Of Spades(Really Sucks I Tryed to Use A C4d And Failed)


Hollywood Undead


My First SOTW Entry


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[soapy]

im no good with rating but id tell u what i think

top tag-the render seems like it wasnt proportionally resized, like its squished vertically but thats just me

overall, i think all your tags seem kinda desaturated, maybe add more contrast. also if you add font in, you should place it as close to the focal as you can.

[Darkrai]

The rating of 0-10 won't help you at all, so I won't use it.

TAG #1 - first of all, the size of the tag is too big (sometimes that size helps, but not on this case). The position of the render is good however, as it isn't right in the center, which provides a too obvious of a focal point. You have the correct sense of lighting - as we can see from the render, it's coming from behind, and you did that. However, you overused it; tone it down. The choice of the background was good, but it is too blurry, and the lighting covers a part of it. So sharpen it up (including the render).

TAG #2 - First, the motion blur looks really bad. And the whole tag looks blurry - sharpen it up. The background looks good, could use some more details.

TAG #3 - The c4d on the left doesn't look that bad - the smudged card, however, does. It's as if the tag had two parts, and they're both completely different.

TAG #4 - The best one of the set, but still needs a lot of work. You seem to overuse the blur tool - use the sharpen one instead. Nice background, just needs some tiny details.

TAG #5 - If the left part was blue as well, the tag would be much better. Maybe add a few clouds.

And on all tags, remove the text.

[ReMiiX]

Originally Posted by Darkrai

The rating of 0-10 won't help you at all, so I won't use it.

TAG #1 - first of all, the size of the tag is too big (sometimes that size helps, but not on this case). The position of the render is good however, as it isn't right in the center, which provides a too obvious of a focal point. You have the correct sense of lighting - as we can see from the render, it's coming from behind, and you did that. However, you overused it; tone it down. The choice of the background was good, but it is too blurry, and the lighting covers a part of it. So sharpen it up (including the render).

TAG #2 - First, the motion blur looks really bad. And the whole tag looks blurry - sharpen it up. The background looks good, could use some more details.

TAG #3 - The c4d on the left doesn't look that bad - the smudged card, however, does. It's as if the tag had two parts, and they're both completely different.

TAG #4 - The best one of the set, but still needs a lot of work. You seem to overuse the blur tool - use the sharpen one instead. Nice background, just needs some tiny details.

TAG #5 - If the left part was blue as well, the tag would be much better. Maybe add a few clouds.

And on all tags, remove the text.

First Of All Thanks For Taking Your Time To Write All Of That
Secondly Thanks... You Have Realy Helped,, Using your Tips Im Gna Make Your A gift