Wrath of War - Guild Inn

SiLo · 02-10-08, 19:10

Fist sig in a while!

Alexei · 02-10-08, 19:13

I don't really like the clipping masks on the right, they seem to attract too much attention away from the focal. It's also quite mess, which makes it hard to look at and hard to keep your eyes on the focal. Effects are quite nice though, just a tad too messy for my liking.

Also, try putting your text a bit closer to your focal because they always seem to work better and less distracting from the focal when they're closer.

Raconteur · 02-10-08, 22:51

Yeah it's a complete mess sorry. 4/10 because it's got bright colours. There is no depth and the text is way to flowery and hasto much glow

G.R.E.E.D. · 04-10-08, 00:09

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Originally Posted by Alexei

and less distracting from the focal when they're closer.

what/where iz the focal?

Ringwurmthe2nd · 04-10-08, 05:54

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Originally Posted by G.R.E.E.D.

what/where iz the focal?

I do believe that would be the render... it needs something to make it stand out. B/c you have a red render... and a red background. I honestly think it looks very cool, but it needs some sort of depth to tell where the render stops and the BG starts.