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Hutzon · 04-02-08, 18:39

Name: Hutzon
Age: 17
5 tags:

LPs/Misc. Artwork:
you know what i can do
http://hutzon.deviantart.com/gallery/#_featured--2

Experience: 2 years 2 months

Wat u think u should be rated?: low inter/solid inter, since last time i got rated i was high mod, which was 2 months ago

.tehmick · 04-02-08, 19:26

im allowed to help so ill get started

DOOM : id say your right inbetween high mod and low inter , some of your stuff i like but need to work on composition and colour mostly ^^

MAGIC : id say high novice : / , like some of the c4ds look ok but they kinda look slapped on with just some background or graident , you need to work on the postwork more to get better at it ^^

AXEFFECT : low/solid moderate i think , you seem to be going to the right way but need to work on your colours and effects mostly , do them and you will get better ^^

DAZE : id say moderate , if you can control those effects better and work on colours youd be heading the right way ^^

HALFLIFE : id say solid inter , your colours are good but its placement of effects bring it down on some tags , also you kow yourself about that second tag ( from chaosgfx ) , but your tags are missing those little things that make a good tag great yah ^^

LTP : yeh moderate , your colours and effects are bringing you down mostly , if you can work on colours and get those effecs to be smoother ect youd get much better ^^

STRIFE : high moderate , i like the first and last tags , but effects ( middle 4 ) and the empty looking spaces bring them down , id say work on those ^^

ASPIRE : solid/high mod , some of them tags look cool but are looking a lil to plain , mabey if you bring more flare ( no , not lense flare xD ) and shizz to them , they could look better ^^

AHLTO : novice , there dead plain and look a bit boring , if you can work on the style in the last sig you could get better , get ahold of some tuts mate ^^

VOID : moderate , the c4d looks a little to randomly placed and the blur is looking quite bad on that tag mate , work on those effects , and get them smooth and not to 1 side ^^

HUTZON : id still say high mod , there looking a little bit boring and colours on the bottom one arent the best , you definetly need to get more into those tags to get to inter^^

aspire · 04-02-08, 22:03

any suggestions for how i could get said flare? if you have any its probably not best to discuss this here...so maybe add me on msn reeperkyle@hotmail.com or AIM KyleBradfield

Conserve · 04-02-08, 22:28

What could be improved to make my tags inter, could you give examples?

glassbitch · 04-02-08, 22:37

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Originally Posted by .tehmick

MAGIC : id say high novice : / , like some of the c4ds look ok but they kinda look slapped on with just some background or graident , you need to work on the postwork more to get better at it ^^

im pretty sure he just wanted to get rated on his c4d work alone..
the c4ds he has posted in his DA arent meant to be LP's, Theyre just c4ds on a gradient background.

halflifE · 04-02-08, 23:15

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Originally Posted by .tehmick

HALFLIFE : id say solid inter , your colours are good but its placement of effects bring it down on some tags , also you kow yourself about that second tag ( from chaosgfx ) , but your tags are missing those little things that make a good tag great yah ^^

Think you could give a bit more feedback on effects placement?

Yeah I know about the 2nd tag, just using it as an example though.

Magic · 04-02-08, 23:18

you are right good sir, i of course can do much better than a 2 later PSD, if you had taken the time ot READ the description of any of ym C4D's, you would have noticed that it says:
"Download will be a PSD file with the C4D render on a transparent layer as well as the gradient background layer!"
now, I wouldn't mind being classed by non, and not by some person who doesnt care to read the description of said pieces, obvoisuly you were just skimming through my pieces, so I wouldn't mind being classed by somebody actually taking the time to look at said art.

rejoice art · 04-02-08, 23:23

Name: rejoice
Age:33
5 tags:

LPs/Misc. Artwork:
http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...ttleLPcopy.png

http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j.../DSOTWcopy.png

http://i271.photobucket.com/albums/j...urgerecopy.png

Experience: about 9 months
Wat u think u should be rated?:not sure and dont really mind

I'm more interested in what I should work on to get better
thanks

ps guess im paying whoever rates me ?

.tehmick · 04-02-08, 23:24

yo i class what i see aight

and placement , that cant be said by me , cause it changes with every stock used

EDIT : even if its on a transparent layer , does that change the c4d at all !

thats just life mate , get used to it